Hello Bloggers! So sorry for not posting for a while:( Anyways its good to be back posting! Today I've made a haiku which is based on Auckland's volcanoes. I want you bloggers to guess what kind of volcano eruption it is! Make sure to leave a comment of your guess and have a good think, have fun with it๐ Now lets get on with it shall we! โ๏ธEnjoyโ๏ธ
I'm super different
I make showers through lava
Bursting is my thing
Hello Dayelle,
ReplyDeleteYour volcano poem is very descriptive and interesting. I think this type of eruption is a tuff cone eruption. See you soon!
~Balqees๐
Kia ora Dayelle, great to see you posting your work online. You have some excellent word choices: "lava oozes" and "bursting".
ReplyDeleteIt can be tricky to get the haiku syllable count (5 - 7 - 5) correct. You can check online by visiting: https://syllablecounter.net/
I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kia pai tล rฤ. (Have a good day.)
Talofa lava Dayelle, thank you for sharing your work with us. I am so happy to see you posting your work and I look forward to seeing more. Remember, when you write your Haiku Poem, it is very important to get the right count 5 - 7 - 5 correct. Your first and second line needs work on but your third line is correct. Manuia le aso (Have a good day).
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